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How was it "well written"? There was literally NO plot or story, at least not a good one. The author didn't even have JUST plotholes, she literally did NOTHING with the premises she provided in the first place so she basically negated all the premises she gave.
This story was truly beautiful and so very well written. The fantasy aspects of "other worlds" was a spot on reference to how your life is never the same after the death of a lover. Rather than taking the dark road of grief and portraying the journey the MC goes through as based in reality, the author did a wonderful job of using fantasy to portray it instead. The results end the same though, with the MC coming to terms with their loss, accepting it, learning to live the life in front of him and finding happiness there. The plot is unique and interesting, but the portrayal of those important feelings is never lost to the fantasy. I'm genuinely impressed at how well the author was able to make analogies to those intense feelings without losing their impact to the fantasy aspects. Achievement Unlocked!