I'm glad I'm not the only one who's lost. Partly I think this is because of the placement ...

radlouis March 22, 2018 9:42 am

I'm glad I'm not the only one who's lost. Partly I think this is because of the placement of dialogue. You'll have a sentence get cut off, and image in between, and the continuation of that sentence. I also think it's due to the continuation of certain segments. The two scenes were we saw Lego and Mono together were placed so, so far apart, I complete lost track of that scene. Also, the dialogue is incredibly vague at times, I'm guessing for suspense, but that's clearly not working here, given the amount of people who are confused. I believe there's also an assumption that the reader is supposed to understand certain conversations with no previous knowledge or establishment of that concept. When the girl with the pink eyes was talking about lost memories and Hades, I was just like... what? Rant over hahah! I do actually enjoy this story, but I hate being kept in the dark for a type of suspense that leads to confusion rather than hoping for the next chapter.

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    Maica March 22, 2018 10:28 am

    don't forget that someone translated this from Korean (yes, lezhin also publishes this in English, but in the end the artist is Korean and does not speak English)

    Anonymous March 22, 2018 11:15 am
    don't forget that someone translated this from Korean (yes, lezhin also publishes this in English, but in the end the artist is Korean and does not speak English) @Maica

    Wish I could understand Korean, I always prefer reading in original language

    radlouis March 22, 2018 4:55 pm
    don't forget that someone translated this from Korean (yes, lezhin also publishes this in English, but in the end the artist is Korean and does not speak English) @Maica

    I don't think it's the translation. The translation is pretty good.

    Anonymous March 22, 2018 10:06 pm

    This comment was right on the money. It's like listening inside jokes as an outsider and nobody takes the effort to fill you in. Also, it's difficult to say who is speaking to whom sometimes.

    bimblefrog March 23, 2018 7:40 am

    good points tbh. I've had to scroll up and down numerous time in past chapters just to finish the sentence and also figure out which character said it