right!?! For me, it definitely felt like there was something missing. It is a good story and I really enjoyed it, but there's just a little something that isn't there.
That is to say that the missing part makes it bad, it's just that it would make it even better!
That is to say that the missing part *DOES NOT makes it bad, it's just that it would make it even better!
Yes i agree
YEAH ME TOO I FELT IT SO PLAIN AND FLAT
I don't think that there is a vital part missing. It just is a slice of live story, calm and slow, with not to much depth to keep the reader entertained but not overly invested. In that sense it succeeded, it feels whole. But the spark to make it extraordinary is indeed missing.
I beg to disagree. Didn’t feel whole to me. Something felt missing.
i feel like it's missing a few things to make it a greater story, a little more development in their emotions and a little bit more order but it was cute.