Weird to read...really.

Morohtar April 28, 2018 8:07 pm

The pacing of this was really off, so much so that it felt like a recap of something bigger and longer.
Not only were parts missing that would have made the switch from one scene or topic to another smooth and/or better, but some situations just escalated out of nowhere to get to the next part of the plot. Which isn't good.

The art is good and the overall story is very interesting, but how it was put on paper in the end wasn't good.

Even the sex scene was kind of random and it would have worked better to entirely erase it instead of putting the shown scene in there.

All in all it's very lacking and not pleasant to read. (Which is a shame since the story is interesting and the characters are as well.)


It's a nice read for some, but if you're looking for good story writing and execution of that...this isn't for you, most likely.

Responses
    R0se April 29, 2018 8:10 pm

    True. I also thought it was going to be longer. It has potential but the mangaka didn't find the way to exploit it.

    Morohtar May 7, 2018 12:12 am
    True. I also thought it was going to be longer. It has potential but the mangaka didn't find the way to exploit it. R0se

    It definitely has potential, settings like these are rare so I'm always happy to see someone do them but this was really disappointing in many ways.
    Hopefully they'll re-do this at some point, although that's not a thing for mangaka, sadly.

    Jesss November 15, 2019 4:49 am

    I liked it the easy l way it was. It felt like a slice of life story. The sex scene was fine. They were finally reunited and couldn't hold back after such a tragedy. Jmo tho =)