This def felt a bit rushed towards the end, we didn’t rlly get to see the...
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It would have been better to add up more chapters like yuuutsu na asa
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Suspense ki maa chod di saalo ne
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It actually has a wide topic and trying to explain all matter in 5 chapter ...
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The pacing of this was really off, so much so that it felt like a recap of something bigger and longer.
Not only were parts missing that would have made the switch from one scene or topic to another smooth and/or better, but some situations just escalated out of nowhere to get to the next part of the plot. Which isn't good.
The art is good and the overall story is very interesting, but how it was put on paper in the end wasn't good.
Even the sex scene was kind of random and it would have worked better to entirely erase it instead of putting the shown scene in there.
All in all it's very lacking and not pleasant to read. (Which is a shame since the story is interesting and the characters are as well.)
It's a nice read for some, but if you're looking for good story writing and execution of that...this isn't for you, most likely.