Not really that good.

Morohtar May 19, 2018 5:29 pm

I liked how it started out, but then the artworks somehow became worse the further I read (seriously, some of those faces are just hideous and/or hilarious to look at).
I get the plot: Masochist falls in love and gets dominated and so on. But honestly, it felt rushed and off in many ways. The uke was interesting but the seme was nothing more than a jerk from what was shown. And there were too many things that were left out to save pannels (aka, that lubing up scene was damn important but was entirely left out).

As nice as the basic plot is...the execution isn't good.
Even the errors in translation don't feel awkward since it fits the lacking plot and art issues to some extend.


Not really recommended unless you don't mind flaws and scrapped scenes, dialogue and lack of reactions/emotions displayed.

Responses
    kuro white May 20, 2018 9:47 am

    Honestly agreed I too felt like it was rushed . So much more could of been added and this story could of even been extended slightly ifghe author approached it from he right angle.

    I also kinna felt like the UK's should of at least fought back and be hesitant instead of just submitting. Technically that was rape of what just happened. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧

    Morohtar May 20, 2018 5:47 pm
    Honestly agreed I too felt like it was rushed . So much more could of been added and this story could of even been extended slightly ifghe author approached it from he right angle. I also kinna felt like the UK... kuro white

    Well, based on his behavior and train of thought he fell for the seme right off the bat without realizing and how the sex happened and the uke having a positive reaction I heavily asume he's actually a masochist. So that probably turned him on more than it bothered him. X'D

    But yeah, this could have been a really amazing story if it was done a bit differently here and there and had more chapters. Too bad authors never do a re-work of past stories, that would be nice for this one. ლ(´ڡ`ლ)