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well, 9 out of 10 it was coitus "nevermind" so readers and protagonists alike blue-b alled from chapter to chapter. It was glorious ^^
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well, 9 out of 10 it was coitus "nevermind" so readers and protagonists alike blue-b alled from chapter to chapter. It was glorious ^^
I really liked the story. It had depth and emotion, and certainly took the time to develop the characters for the reader. If there were any flaws they were that at times the story and pace seemed to lag, and that the sex almost seemed to interrupt the story rather than to add to it.