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Ok first off I know that Harada made it "obvious" I just thought you didn't know by your choice of wording. What made me think so, was that you clearly put down how the uke should give the seme another chance since he all depressed and stuff. Basically when you put this down, you phrased it to where it seemed like you didn't know wtf was going on. Like again the part when you were just talking about how adorable, and heart-breakingly depressed the seme was.

idk anymore ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭. i like the story, but i dislike some of the character traits lol. like for the uke of the story, i dont like he cant just give him another chance just by understanding that he was severely desperate, but if he becomes soft and gives in He'S GoInG To SuFfEr...AGAIN and i dont want that XD. For the seme of the story, i was sad how he gave up everything on the spot, he could've kept trying but became really adorablely but heart-breakingly depressed, but what i DONT like is how everything is planned out SO perfectly that it gives me chills. and that DUDE who actually looks like a girl just had to say something to throw everything off it's balance, but if he didnt, the uke would've STILL BEEN SUFFERING!!
so. now im just gunna read to see what happens since its now like "i wish this could happen, but this happened! but if it does happen, then THIS will happen..."