Very much agreed. Like, I admit, I enjoy some good "horrible stuff" in my fiction. But this one was just.... Meh. The dialog and pacing were just poor. Add to that the horrible character art where the characters look like different people in almost every panel and, well, yeah, not great.
I'm a bit disappointed really.
Same. If they placed a little more time and work into it then this wouldn't be a problem.
Why don't any of the people who disliked my post make some argument as to why I'm wrong?
Bo większość ludzi na tej stronie to debile, którzy wrzeszczą głośno jak ktoś ma odmienne zdanie. Tutaj wszystko trzeba akceptować. Chore lewackie łby.
Alright, good point. I would reply in polish but I can't without using google translate because I can't spell in polish but I do know the grammar so I usually change it so it makes sense.
I assumed you're Polish because you have an icon of Polish flag next to your name.
Yeah, I am but I moved to Poland when I was about 9 and haven't written in polish since then. I can understand it perfectly but I can't write in it. I'm actually considering re-learning it and getting some qualifications in it since all I need to do is learn how to write in it well.
You moved TO Poland and you haven't written in Polish since then? That doesn't make sense. You probably meant that you moved away from Poland.
OMG opppssss. I moved from Poland to England. I just didn't sleep so that's why I'm not paying attention.
-The characters have no good qualities and don't seem even slightly human like
-The sex scene sucked. I mean really, no blood, no shivering, just putting it in so quickly. I'm into stuff like this yet I found this chapter so disappointing. The author must have never drawn a sex scene before and have only seen the most generic yaoi that exists.
-I know I made this point before but the characters are just boring stereotypes with no depth
-The rape scene is so pointless and forced