I'm not being rude or anything, but the lines looks so forced (and cheap?? ooh dont hate m...

Suck my tortellini August 16, 2018 3:14 pm

I'm not being rude or anything, but the lines looks so forced (and cheap?? ooh dont hate me on this one) for me somehow? i mean i still read it because i live for the fluff, but the lines just feels so forced and not natural. The drama's like thrown in suddenly. I hope it get better.

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    Airena August 17, 2018 3:33 pm

    I call manga like this the "developing artist's work" It's pleasant and has a great theme but most of it feels a little too let's say repetitive

    Airena August 17, 2018 3:34 pm

    Ps: The author might need some time to delop and that might come with the continuation of the story