Dear author, a story needs CHARACTERS
DEVELOPMENT
PLEASE make some change instead of drawing a dog chasing after a dude’s ass
I’m soooo angry but I don’t want to cause problems by criticizing in English on author’s social media but I really hope she/he understands that adding sex to every chapter can’t hide lack of characters’ development
Oh wow it’s FIVE volumes
Yeah and NO DEVELOPMENT
you know what
I’m done
DONE
I came back and realized I probably acted too furious lol
But still I wanna slap both of them real hard
Honestly I don’t feel A BIT sympathy for the stupid seme
He’s one of the most stupid and idiotic semes in all yaoi mangas ( He’s almost as annoying and on-nerve as the seme in Lover Boy )
It doesn’t make sense
His feelings are probably lust
He deserves to be taught a good lesson for his unbelievable amount of stupidity
I don’t understand why everyone is ignoring the fact that he’d been a complete jerk
He still is, but he’s also a very very stupid jerk
Plus, i’m very angry about the fact that it’s been three volumes and we barely have a clue of the bitch’s ( Makio, the no.1 Bitch ) feelings and i’m extremely dissatisfied about it
No, I liked the story
I liked the characters ( AT FIRST BECAUSE THE CHARACTERS DEVELOPMENT AND EVERYTHING IS SO *AWFULLY TERRIBLE* )
This seme really needs to grow some brain cells, idiot
There’s barely any character development
And we still see NOTHING coming from Makio after THREE damn volumes
That’s a lot for not seeing any damn character development at all
I want to slap the seme really hard, slap him until he can finally THINK instead of fucking
USE YOUR BRAIN IDIOT
How the fuck can you still be super cringy and clingy to a fucking cheater? Who never stops tricking you
Too much stupidity for me
The author really needs to do something about characters’ development
It’s been three volumes and all we’ve seen so far is a dog chasing after an ass
I want to see some actions from the uke!