Yeaaaah I think I’m officially done

afoolsdesire October 31, 2018 6:59 am

Um yeah how about nooo? I really gave this webtoon too much leeway because the art was so beautiful but in reality this is a shit show—if this had no art and was a plain story I know for a fact I would have dropped this 30 chapters ago—does the author not realize they just ENDED their relationship in this chapter??? Do they realize that this whole “bonding” thing that will FORCE them to reunite ONCE AGAIN is just not going to work in reality???? It’s almost like these characters KNOW they’re not right for each other but the author, the creator, the person IN CONTROL, is intertwining they’re paths ‘till they make it work. (which um spoiler alert won’t because the authors excellent character development tarnished their relationship from the beginning)

It’s harder to really criticize this as I don’t know what the webtoon standards are and I’m more of a book analyst but I sure as HELL know the art is beautiful and the plot and dialogue are ridiculous and would flop so fast in the writing world but everyone for their own I guess.
Huh no offense

Responses
    Mitzy October 31, 2018 7:18 am

    after the end of the first season, i sincerely left this webtoon and didn't get back to it until it was a couple chapters into the new "season". and when i did, i made sure to reread the entire thing and take into consideration the fact that they were in fact human and that this takes place in an omegaverse so certain topics were bound to be pushed on us to see but never really confront throughout the plot and i had sincerely believed, "maybe they actually do have a chance- i mean, both of these characters have the potential to develop and be each others catalyst into becoming their ultimate self. they're human but still redeemable." is what i had thought during my second read through, really hoping for the best. but then these last three chapters came out and i knew for a fact that the author/creator had no intention of really putting them through any actual development that we can see and actually think of as "healthy". i really think, before the second season, that this really had the potential of being a really great story. but then this entire shit show happened and now... yeah, i totally agree with you.

    i say this out of my own personal opinion because i am a stickler for good ass character development and this story just didn't give me that so i am respectfully chucking up my deuces and making me way out of here. hope it ends well for those that like the story as is.

    neko.lover October 31, 2018 7:30 am

    omg thank uuuuu!!! took the words out of my mouth!

    Little_Illusions October 31, 2018 10:44 am

    Mood tbh im officially done emotionally with this manga, I'll probably keep on reading just because it's a thing i have where i have ti finish a story but this whole plot line to me is just one big shit fuck. (#-.-)