im disappointed. I’ve read the author’s previous story before this and it was so bad, ...

Bishie November 2, 2018 9:06 pm

im disappointed. I’ve read the author’s previous story before this and it was so bad, the whole story has so much bad drama, there’s a lot of forced sexual assault and pain in the story and I was extremely dissatisfied with how it turned out. I read this because maybe it would change, maybe, but I’m disappointed agin. It’s another case of forced sexual assault, and the author didn’t take in consideration all the different problems in this story. Dojin seems like the victim here even tho he is the one that kept forcing himself onto Hyesung, and it’s not like there’s enough character development to see if he’s ever changed. From the path that this is going to, Hyesung is forced to be Dojin’s mate after the situation that was caused by Dojin. I don’t like both characters tbh, they don’t have any redeeming qualities, this whole story seems to be a lack of planning and has a lack of redeeming qualities for both of the characters. At this point, I don’t even think that Dojin loves Hyesung. I don’t even remember any specific moments that made me think that he’s in love, it’s more his alpha qualities rather than himself. Overall, disappointed. I don’t think I’ll be reading this author again after another sexual assault based story, it’s u comfortable and just never ends out well in her stories.

Responses
    Hana November 2, 2018 9:30 pm

    I believe your real issue here is that you simply don't like this kind of dramatic BL romance. It's funny to see you being disappointed as if you had professionally analyze this manhwa, but in reality you just simply don't like this kind of story. In short, no matter how "good" this manga is, you'd never like it anyway if your reason of disappointment is due to the intensity of drama amd sexual contents. For your own good, I advice you to stop reading yaoi or at least try looking for stories that has no drama tag in it.

    Fetish Love November 2, 2018 9:57 pm

    YES, THIS!!!! Perfect summary and analysis! Thank you for putting it together and sharing!!

    Fetish Love November 2, 2018 10:06 pm
    I believe your real issue here is that you simply don't like this kind of dramatic BL romance. It's funny to see you being disappointed as if you had professionally analyze this manhwa, but in reality you just ... Hana

    uh no, this story was badly written and disorganized and ignores the basic necessities of a good romance.

    The creator should be including everything important or that's needed to tell their story in the actual story itself and not in other mediums like twitter. They can put extra bits, spin-offs, or tid-bits of their thoughts out on twitter, but the focus and vital details have to be included in the actual work itself to have effect.

    Fetish Love November 2, 2018 10:43 pm
    uh no, this story was badly written and disorganized and ignores the basic necessities of a good romance. The creator should be including everything important or that's needed to tell their story in the actual ... Fetish Love

    unless Fargo's (the creator's) true intent was for this to be a tragedy, but started it off with "romance" to have the tragic twist at the end, as long as you've read the story right and not mistaken or confused anything than for what it truly is, that is.


    That would be amazing and I would love Fargo for it.

    Depressedduckling November 3, 2018 12:05 am
    unless Fargo's (the creator's) true intent was for this to be a tragedy, but started it off with "romance" to have the tragic twist at the end, as long as you've read the story right and not mistaken or confuse... Fetish Love

    I'm pretyt sure its like this, its isnt the happiest manga lol

    Bishie November 3, 2018 4:17 am
    I'm pretyt sure its like this, its isnt the happiest manga lol Depressedduckling

    yeah, I realize that, but there’s so many holes in this story that at this point, i have no idea what Fargo can do next. There’s onlt one more chapter left in this story, and I have no idea how she will be able to conclude everything in one chapter.

    Bishie November 3, 2018 4:26 am
    I believe your real issue here is that you simply don't like this kind of dramatic BL romance. It's funny to see you being disappointed as if you had professionally analyze this manhwa, but in reality you just ... Hana

    No no no, it’s not simply just that. This was fun to read until it just progressively made me more confused the more I read it. At this point, we haven’t seen Dojin reallt are Hyesung more than a muse, and I feel like the author is missing some key info because I don’t feel anything from him. The fact that I don’t see Fargo focusing on the fact that it’s kind of rape is also what disappoints me. There’s one more chapter left in this story, I have no idea how she’s going to resolve everything so quickly, it seems that she might make a rushed and unsatisfied ending. Drama manwhas are good, I read them all the time, but you don’t understand that there’s too many missing info that the story just feels incomplete. If she’s trying to make them in a happy relationship at the end, it’s not going to feel right from a reader’s standpoint. It’s not that I don’t like the general plot of this story, I wouldn’t have read it if I didn’t like the fact that it’s dramatic, but the lack of characterization from certain characters and the overall pace of this story isn’t the best. I think this story had great potential, she just had a difficult time adding stuff into the story to the point where it doesn’t feel right. I’m open to opposing opinions though, I’m not particularly fighting anyone, it’s just my viewpoint.

    Depressedduckling November 3, 2018 2:39 pm
    yeah, I realize that, but there’s so many holes in this story that at this point, i have no idea what Fargo can do next. There’s onlt one more chapter left in this story, and I have no idea how she will be ... Bishie

    There really is honestly. I did see this. It's a bit annoying ... >_<