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So happy to find this comment bc I was starting to feel alone. Like the art is beautiful, characters are gorgeous but no matter how I try I can't get into the groove of the story! I can't describe what's wrong. I just know its not RIGHT! Lol! The seme is comes off as a little underhanded...but not in the good seme way. It just feels creepy. Not giving up though! I feel the story has got to get better! Right??
It has really good art, but I cant say the same for the story, it's to illogical... like, would someone would really go "ok, fine" after finding you are immortal? And he says it still hurts, but his face doesnt says so, he just goes about it like it's nothing. And what made the seme think he would agree to change to being lovers? That's pretty much the same as when he was a bullet proof before... just with out bullet proofing... it just doesn make sense, and it's too fast for my tastes