Mmmm...

marian-hime November 20, 2018 12:55 am

It has really good art, but I cant say the same for the story, it's to illogical... like, would someone would really go "ok, fine" after finding you are immortal? And he says it still hurts, but his face doesnt says so, he just goes about it like it's nothing. And what made the seme think he would agree to change to being lovers? That's pretty much the same as when he was a bullet proof before... just with out bullet proofing... it just doesn make sense, and it's too fast for my tastes

Responses
    Rex December 3, 2018 3:57 am

    I think I'll probably like him, I mean no use picnicking over it

    LaLa December 10, 2018 4:36 pm

    At one point in the story it calls him "a bullet proof", which suggests that there are other people like him in this writer's universe.

    Leviathan December 12, 2018 10:40 pm

    I've the same issues with this story as well. Things are moving too fast and they don't quite add up. The overall lack of rationale and pace doesn't go with the creator's first manga that was more well-balanced and mature.

    Suggababi December 25, 2018 12:30 pm

    So happy to find this comment bc I was starting to feel alone. Like the art is beautiful, characters are gorgeous but no matter how I try I can't get into the groove of the story! I can't describe what's wrong. I just know its not RIGHT! Lol! The seme is comes off as a little underhanded...but not in the good seme way. It just feels creepy. Not giving up though! I feel the story has got to get better! Right??

    marian-hime December 25, 2018 5:06 pm
    So happy to find this comment bc I was starting to feel alone. Like the art is beautiful, characters are gorgeous but no matter how I try I can't get into the groove of the story! I can't describe what's wrong.... Suggababi

    I cant say it gets better, I would hope but I did give up ╮( ̄ε ̄)╭ sorry