Plot

Stabrina November 27, 2018 6:47 pm

When was the last time something interesting and plot related occurred?

Responses
    Sachiko December 4, 2018 3:23 pm

    This is the plot. Sorry if you can't understand it but that's not the author's fault. Also, read above.

    Stabrina December 10, 2018 8:41 am
    This is the plot. Sorry if you can't understand it but that's not the author's fault. Also, read above. Sachiko

    ? Having no plot is the plot?

    anyway right now the “plot” is rambling fluff with no substance. Every chapter is ‘cute’ but there’s no drama, intrigue, or complexity. Just a bunch of background stuff that should have been explained in the first twenty chapters.

    The start was solid but now that everyone LOVES the mc, it’s gotten so boring. Like, she has no goals. Obviously her dad won’t kill her anymore so she’s just there looking cute and being fawned and protected. B o r i n g. when will she actually act like a smart grown woman or use her past life knowledge to do... anything??

    Anyway, I believe this is all due to the author’s bad writing x”D. I’m holding on for my love of Assisi but now even he is starting to feel like a one dimensional stock character true “pretty face protector with the terrible past who is really sweet once you get to know him”. the mc is totally useless and becoming very Mary Sue-y “everyone loves me and I can do no wrong also I have magic blood and I’m super special”. I just want a time skip to when she does something worthy of an ‘MC’. I want the author to give me something— anything to show me that these characters aren’t falling into bland stereotypes when the start was so good!

    But hey, that’s just the opinion of someone who “doesn’t understand it” I suppose

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