I... I don't get it... The story is all over the place. The idea is interesting but the st...

Zabkooo January 14, 2019 2:36 am

I... I don't get it... The story is all over the place. The idea is interesting but the story just skips way too much. Like I don't understand why he has to stay with that wealthy kid?
And I did he run away from home? How long was he away? It seems like there are sometimes months between the scenes.
I get the emotions and all that. But there are way too many plot holes. Sometimes characters just pop up. And with a bit of thinking I get who it could be. But I m never really sure if I got it right
It's just way too overdramatic for me. It has no depth. The emotions are there but the story is not
But I will keep reading. Maybe someday I will get the whole story

Responses
    Wow❤❤❤ January 14, 2019 8:27 pm

    I geel the same way sometime the characters have no emotion then just all the emotion