people here with the "finely" like Really?!?

estar January 17, 2019 8:20 pm

what is so gr8 about John going on a rampage??????????????!! that help find Sera?!? help anyone????
all those that r rooting for john r seeing him as the underdog - well he Bleeding well ISN'T One - he is the top dog that has his balls in a vice - y'all forgot the destruction he brought on his previous school?!? forget the Male detective mentioning how he handled a top tear when he came to interrogate Sera before she lost her powers?!? he was talking about "dear" John and i'm sure he "leashed' him in, by threatening his father - thats why John is sulking around with a mask on - he aint no hero!
just an impotent fucking time-bomb thats waiting to go off - whats the use of his father writing that book ?!? or the author mentioning that to us?!???

Responses
    Vort January 18, 2019 12:45 pm

    It's called bad writing. Dunno if the author just needed filler, or what, but this comic used to be well written. This is just bad. I'm just gonna stick it out until we get back to the non-cringeworthy writing. I have faith that we can Make Unordinary Great Again!

    estar January 18, 2019 3:25 pm
    It's called bad writing. Dunno if the author just needed filler, or what, but this comic used to be well written. This is just bad. I'm just gonna stick it out until we get back to the non-cringeworthy writing.... Vort

    donno if ur right- cause from the get go there were loads of "glitches" in they way the story was setup but still cause liked the premise & kept hoping this would take a turn to something worth rooting for. also keep wondering if something is getting lost in translation.

    Yumgum January 25, 2019 7:49 am
    It's called bad writing. Dunno if the author just needed filler, or what, but this comic used to be well written. This is just bad. I'm just gonna stick it out until we get back to the non-cringeworthy writing.... Vort

    Omg I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought that the writing got so messy. I really liked it at the beginning but know it just feels all over the place.