Responses
I never saw it as him being harsh. At those times the seme was being childish or kind of selfish and the uke is just trying to get him to see it. I felt that the seme should have been more mature and I liked how he finally overcame his childishness to act like a responsible adult.
I thought the uke was more childish than the seme when I read the story but I can somewhat see your point.
This was really nice art and interesting story however...
The personality of the uke pisses me off and the choices he made throughout the story irritated me as well.
The words he said to the seme often are harsh and uncalled for. When its someone you love.. why would you constantly call them stupid, childish, etc? The seme sure is patient...
The brother didn't really bother me much, typical annoying know-it-all older brother.
I just wish the uke would realize the semes feelings. Doing nice things for other people is fine but also recognize your partners feelings... yeah.... not a fan of the uke... but good story.