A Man Like You: Friendship is Magic

aggravated seme February 26, 2019 7:02 pm

//// First, that cat

That cat had my in my feeling. When his father buried that cat I was really fucking shook cause I remember at that age I found my cat dead and she was just flung in the dumpster. Like, damn I never even knew that hurt me till now.

//// A point about his childhood

I like the lesson that there is always two sides to things. Lu Xuan Run is absolutely a fucking antagonist and I do think most of his choices are his own damn fault.

I know a lot of Lu Xuan Runs. I think we always teach kids how to come out on top and be the best but never how to just be a fucking human. Everything isn't always going to go your way, and I feel like a lot of kids today aren't taught that either.

//// This is a BAD direction to go in

I am conflicted because this author really could've picked up their pieces with chapter 82. Okay, we're at the point where the cat happens, we see things from everyone else's side . . . . . but sudden forgiveness, really?

That's not realistic at all. And Seonyhun truly did not deserve it. This man committed more crimes over a vacation than I've done my whole life.

I think some good directions to go in would have been:

1) Someone intervenes, someone beyond the trio. Perhaps, his father? That would've did justice to the flashback. And clearly he's influenced by this man.

2) The situation fizzles and Seonyhun does not come back. He stays in China where the fuck he belongs. And finds some healing -- honestly, bring his dad back. Like, this dude need his papi.

3) Seonyhun is actually punished, the whole repercussions -- however, I can see Siwon choosing not to press charges cause he's an idiot. Even the rich "connections" card could be pulled in such a situation.

4) They beat his ass.

Sorry, Seonhyun is not the victim here. He just isn't, and it's hard for me to completely see Jinha that way half of the time because he kept Siwon in the dark a lot too.

Siwon is the only victim here. Period. This guy was literally kidnapped by an evil tootsie role because his boyfriend couldn't tell him that the tootsie role was evil.

To those that say "You're getting a free story." -- Literally shut the fuck up. That doesn't stop the plot from being bad. You wouldn't read a story on Wattpad on say "It's great" if it's not.

//// The solution

Truthfully, the only solution is for the author to re-do the end. This story was bad, but it wasn't at a point of no return until 82. It sucks when the end is just tied up but I've seen stories do it and still keep decent reviews. They should've opted to go out with a bang, rather than a fuck.

Not this Friendship is Magic shit.

Responses
    maychan February 27, 2019 1:31 am

    wow you only relize it now that this stupid plot is not realistic at all? (≧∀≦) good morning to you. it was not realistic ever since this dude show up from china. since normally people won't go with a crazy dude that kidnap their best friend and to drink of alchol.
    the plot was stupid then and it stay stupid now. just like the MC didn't want to listen to his boyfriend warning him about this dude, while the MC know the other guy blackmail him with his naked picture.
    so it just fun to make fun at this story now, since it is a totall mass, don't have any common sense and full of stupid trops. and I thought twilight was bad XDDD