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Lia April 10, 2019 12:28 pm

Dislike this topic all you want but we all know the storyline of this story suuuuucks. I'm just saying for like, 80 whatever chapters it was a lot of bullshit. And I'm not even talking about the 'cockblocking'. I mean, she could've developed a lot in 80 chapters since her intent seems to be dragging it out as long as possible. And that goes for anything, Lihuan or Yangs backgrounds which she did a little ( which was probably one of the best parts, I know you agree with me). Lihuan and his friends which I think maybe she tried to do but I've been nothing but annoyed with those asshole. This chapter just adding to my frustrations from them. We're all pretty much fujoshi, so it's annoying to me to read about one so stereotypical ANNOYING, you know what I mean?

I'm in art college so we talk about story development and besides all my bias complaints the storyline is not cohesive. It's all over the place. So much shit has happened that I'm sure half of us don't remember it and it probably doesn't even matter because I just can't figure out what purpose it serves to the story anyway.

This story has started to feel like a waste of time. I think what makes me the most angry is I can't just stop reading it. I have to finish for closure, just for myself. But I will say I'm glad I didn't spend any real money to support this shit. And I'm giving it a poor rating.

And I think manga artists should hold themselves to a higher standard. Learn how to develop your story and characters and make sure you have a solid all-round plot and learn anatomy you idiots. It's not hard and if you're doing manga it's almost ALL figure so why wouldn't you?

PLeas e don't hate me I just woke up it's 8am and I have work in an hour. I'm just heated from this chapter dude.

Responses
    samatokiss April 10, 2019 12:43 pm

    i don't think you're taking yuyang's character in at all.

    im copy pasting what i wrote in my last comment:
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    remember the fact that yuyang's pretty sensitive when it comes to liking someone. he was in constant denial and chap 75 was only the beginning of his true realisations. ofc the misunderstanding in chap 76 took a toll on him because there's still slight conflict as again, the realisation he had was just a little while ago.

    and also, yuyang is gay. he might be out already, but he still experiences the doubts and anxieties that /some/ gay men have.
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    im not in an art college yet, but i am in an art strand. and i completely disagree with your points about the storyline. are you sure the story is hard to recall or maybe it's just hard to keep track with all the things you read? there's also a thing called rereading.

    the plot is doing FINE. the misunderstanding was there for a REASON. maybe you just suck at keeping up with slow burn stories :')

    and what's a *manhua artist standard?? why are they fucking required to have a high one? i call bullshit. you're trying to make a point but do you realize what you're saying just makes you sound like you're demanding and nit-picky?

    also, as far as i know, djun is posting this for FREE. he doesn't sell this.

    p.s. no, not all of us are fujoshis or fudanshis. some people actually prefer to read something true and heartfelt rather than something fetishizing gay men :)

    lastly, if you hate it so much then just fucking drop it. i dont think djun needs people like you reading his work anyway.

    Misaqi April 10, 2019 1:06 pm

    you’ve enjoyed the past 80 chapters and now you’re demeaning the author’s work and his characters?

    would have thought you’d be more appreciative and thoughtful about the work and effort put into the manhua considering how you’re in art college.

    and you expect people not to hate you for spouting such a thoughtless comment...

    Lia April 10, 2019 5:45 pm
    i don't think you're taking yuyang's character in at all.im copy pasting what i wrote in my last comment:————————————————————remember the fact that yuyang's pretty sensit... samatokiss

    Whatever, this story still sucks and I said most you dumbass so learn to read first. Maybe your poor taste and illiteracy is why you aren't in art college yet, idk.
    I don't have to drop something just because you disagree, asshole. I'm not sure why you're so mad.

    Lia April 10, 2019 5:49 pm
    you’ve enjoyed the past 80 chapters and now you’re demeaning the author’s work and his characters?would have thought you’d be more appreciative and thoughtful about the work and effort put into the manh... Misaqi

    I disagree. Being in art school has given me a more critical outlook on works because you start to realize how lazy people are and most of the time the end goal is only money so quality tends to suffer. And that's not in reference to this story (if it is free).

    samatokiss April 10, 2019 6:53 pm
    Whatever, this story still sucks and I said most you dumbass so learn to read first. Maybe your poor taste and illiteracy is why you aren't in art college yet, idk. I don't have to drop something just because y... Lia

    great assumption! im not in art college because im not of fucking age yet, asshole.

    don't even bother mentioning you're from an art college when you give a so-called "critique" and have the audacity to say "please dont hate me i just woke up úwù"

    im tired of dealing with people like you not only have a shit taste, but don't know a good author when they see one.

    reply to me or not, i dont give a fuck. im muting.

    Lia April 11, 2019 1:50 am
    great assumption! im not in art college because im not of fucking age yet, asshole.don't even bother mentioning you're from an art college when you give a so-called "critique" and have the audacity to say "plea... samatokiss

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