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You got the story very wrong. He did not kill her parents.
I do agree that their relationship is pretty shot though and both of them are Hella dumb.
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I couldn't continue reading, it reminds me of fanfiction... so cliché. The mc is so...weak and has too much pride, she looks down on another race that rules the society, I get that your parents were killed or whatever but atleast go down to their level to fit in and stop acting so...for lack of a better word, weak.