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And I second what the other comments said, would've loved it even more if the seme really had ED, but they still managed to work it out. (gays aren't strictly top, bottom, or versa. Some are sides too.)
But hey, it was still good.
That was a really healthy portrayal of a gay man who's sexually active. You don't see this kind of depiction in yaoi as much as we should.
(though them having sex raw kind of made me uncomfortable ngl. Always keep safe, people!)