Responses
Um more action would mean incomprehensible ( = boring) storytelling. It's sad to see that so many people like the one below you love reading such actually boring stories, though.... T.
I felt this story is quiet boring cuz non-action they take.. I don't mean like one blow like one-shot story type. just make the flow or progress of the story better.
too fast cuz that twins too genius for me to comprehended... too slow cuz more argument and less action between this couple