Fuck off
Finally someone says it! I agree, I know there are only six chapters but up to now this story is very mediocre. The way the author depicts rape is insulting, and also people's reactions...they are finding it hilarious, not horrorific
@jimenaF Lmao. Just because the story you like is bad doesn’t mean you have to get offended when people say it’s shit. Grow up. I like how you commented on my own topic telling me to fuck off but you don’t allow replies. That’s a typical bitch move.
Exactly! I saw a comment that said something like “Is it bad I find this funny lol!!” Because they thought they were being cool and tough for finding dark subjects funny but in reality it’s because the author doesn’t know how to write. If audience reaction is humor, when the author is clearly trying to go for a dark and grim tone, then something is wrong with the writing.
Who cares bitch. Fuck off
Since you don’t allow replies I’m guessing you had to actively go back and look for this. If you don’t care why r u replying back a month later lmao. Go do something productive with your life.
Gross... It’s depicting rape and kidnapping without any tact or literary grace (sounds pretentious but idk what other way to put it) that it feels like a joke. Felt like the author is used to writing bad comedic short stories and then read killing stalking and felt inspired. Or they wanted to write an edgy story/KS copy to rake in those views.
The tone is really off with this one... “Its so gross I want to throw up!” And then he just leaves and comes back with lube and gloves? Like... seriously? That totally killed whatever creepy and tense mood the author was trying to go for. Y’all can’t be comparing KS to this just because it has kidnapping and murder in it. Hell you can’t even compare Warehouse to this. Even Caste Heaven is better. MC in this one is just Bum without any of the qualities that made him fun or interesting. In other words. Its shit.