No character development

Zealot_crazer May 23, 2019 3:05 am

The art is beautiful but the characters are flat. One is unnecessarily innocent and the other has nothing to root for. I understand falling in love quickly but there really is no character development that makes us want to root for the two.

Responses
    Not Your Friend May 26, 2019 10:14 am

    Well it is only th third chapter. If it’s one of the ones with only 5 or 6 chapters, then I’ll agree with you. But if it’s a longer story to tell, then maybe they’ll start to develop.

    Zealot_crazer May 26, 2019 11:05 am

    How can you fall in love with someone when he hasn't done anything worth "falling in love" for?

    Not Your Friend May 26, 2019 11:51 am

    I think calling it love already was a poor choice on the author’s part. I think they should’ve just made him begin to bloom feelings for him and not yet know exactly why rather than just throwing the word “love” into it so soon.

    Sugakookie March 6, 2020 7:50 pm

    I agree