I like it but honestly I felt the story was jumping all over the place so I had to go back...

Dawn May 27, 2019 6:32 pm

I like it but honestly I felt the story was jumping all over the place so I had to go back and reread it a few times lol

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    Mikki June 8, 2019 12:05 pm

    I kind of felt like this could've been like 2 or 3 chapters.