A quick keyboard throw up...

... July 4, 2019 3:49 am

I mean, I did like this update. There seemed to be some progress in the plot and some character development. I've been thinking this story was just on a repetitive cycle of a slightly abusive but smutty relationship between two teenaged boys who are fighting to be the dominant one. They have sex all the time (which is fine) but I was always disappointed that that was all their relationship was. There was no intimacy or intensity between them. With this recent update, we were able to delve deeper into their feelings towards one another and see more than an abrasive interaction (though, by my standards, they were still pretty rough...) Honestly, I don't see any romance occurring in this. This is a story about power and lust and possession. Even if they end up together, they will not be a romantic couple. They will be a pair that has a bond but the intensity of partners/lovers (or even friends) will be absent... I hope this is just my thoughts and not unintentional foreshadowing...

Responses
    Nlghtshade July 4, 2019 4:35 am

    You should read the most recent (raw) chapters, I believe you will be pleased with the development between them :)

    The_Devils_Advocate July 4, 2019 5:02 am
    You should read the most recent (raw) chapters, I believe you will be pleased with the development between them :) Nlghtshade

    Where can we find it?

    Nlghtshade July 4, 2019 7:27 am
    Where can we find it? The_Devils_Advocate

    Search for Fantasy Suicide on facebook, I think they shared chapters 20 to 23 on their page. Some are a bit low qual but it'll be worth it, I promise. Just look at this precious thing: http://imgur.com/CvPwrG0

    The_Devils_Advocate July 4, 2019 7:37 am
    Search for Fantasy Suicide on facebook, I think they shared chapters 20 to 23 on their page. Some are a bit low qual but it'll be worth it, I promise. Just look at this precious thing: http://imgur.com/CvPwrG0 Nlghtshade

    Thanks!

    ... July 4, 2019 4:17 pm
    Search for Fantasy Suicide on facebook, I think they shared chapters 20 to 23 on their page. Some are a bit low qual but it'll be worth it, I promise. Just look at this precious thing: http://imgur.com/CvPwrG0 Nlghtshade

    Hallelujah, thank you! I want to keep reading and I do but I'm scared to be disappointed...