This is so confusing to read I have no idea what’s going on half the time and I feel the author doesn’t even have a good handle on how to properly develop a plot line and order of events. Some things are very nice, but the author is trying to include too many things at once.
This is so confusing to read I have no idea what’s going on half the time and I feel the author doesn’t even have a good handle on how to properly develop a plot line and order of events. Some things are very nice, but the author is trying to include too many things at once.