Uhhh

Ali July 13, 2019 4:20 am

This is so confusing to read I have no idea what’s going on half the time and I feel the author doesn’t even have a good handle on how to properly develop a plot line and order of events. Some things are very nice, but the author is trying to include too many things at once.

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    Airena July 22, 2019 7:37 pm

    I can relate to the confusion. Ch3 already and Im like wtf? I think the comedy part of it is pretty awquardly placed..