Then don’t read it ╮(￣▽￣)╭
um.. the scene seems to be cutting off. but the plot is easy to understand. umm.. actually Danny isn't afraid that much about homophobic, he just cares about Lance's future (just like YuYang in Here U Are). So he left for Lance's sake. They both love each other but afraid to make a move as they thought it would be a disaster. So, they lie to each other (Danny lied about hating gays & Lance lied about having gf) as long as they can be together. But things went wrong after Danny left Lance.. Lance who had an unrequited love had enough with all craps and decided to "force" Danny to accept him by clinging at him. He overcomes Danny's worries. Danny who also fell in love with Lance finally feels assured as he confirmed that their feelings are mutual. He no longer getting mad at Lance and they become a couple (I feel many scenes had been cut off??). Sometimes, when Danny feels insecure like the current chapter, Lance would do something so Danny won't get any wrong idea. I think the plot is simple.
only 1 thing did bother me, "how Danny treats his trauma". sorry if my grammar is bad.
I think how I’m viewing it is that the events throughout the story don’t make sense since they don’t join. For example, the time and setting. The author establishes that they’re in high school, but they don’t continue to tell the audience what’s going on in the background. The main part where the setting changes would be when Danny moves out and finds a new place. One day most of the events takes place in school, and in the next, they’re in pubs. I was especially confused when Lance was a mess and was being cleaned up by his friend. I wasn’t sure if a lot of time passed between that episode and the last. I do disagree that Danny OVERCAME his fears though. I mean, he was scared, and then he wasn’t. I would think that the him growing and changing from from his past self into a person that wasn’t scared to love Lance would be a big part in the story. I’m not sure I even saw any of this. The characters also just irk me, Lance especially. I understand that this is the “real him” and all, but I don’t understand how a person can change so much? There weren’t any hints or transitions, it was just BOOM controlling and lewd. Danny’s childhood trauma is also something I feel is getting ignored? It played a big part in the beginning and middle when Danny left, but now, it’s more of just a standard love story. Can’t really say much about that though since I haven’t read any of the future chapters. But yeah, it these probablems may be because the chapters are getting cut off. Complete episodes would probably clear up some of my problems with the story, but this is how I feel so far with what’s uploaded. :)
I mean, I’m not being forced to read or anything. The story isn’t entirely unbearable. It’s my choice whether I want to read it or not. Just saying what I think afterwards (●'◡'●)ﾉ
That's how you counterargument.. Bravo~~
It's called constructive criticism. You cannot grow if you do not know what needs to be fixed.
Haha thank you :)
So True~~(▰˘◡˘▰)
Yeah. Couldn’t agree more.. the transition. I try to figure out what is the loop.. it’s the transition
It’s not like the creator actually reads the comments (￣∇￣")
Well... Why do we comment even if they don't even read it?
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Cause you want to
yo this is makes no sense. The plot is all weird, the author doesn’t even explain everything, the pacing is all over the place, and the characters aren’t acting in the key ways that they were introduced. For example, Danny was scared of homophobia, so he drifted apart from Lance. But now, he’s suddenly all good with Lance doing all these kinds of “romantic” things now. There wasn’t a point where he started to change his mind, no character development. This really reminds me of those typical shoujo Chinese comics where the heroine is a dumbass, and the love interest is an abusive fuck.