Horrible

FreyjaLilith August 27, 2019 1:46 am

Yet another chinese manhua who tried to keep up with quality korean manhwa with medieval/magic trope and failed so spectacularly. Gods. The cringe. MC is stupid. Emperor is stupid. Villain wannabe is even more stupid. UGh
Why is it even in the featured manga smh

Responses
    Bebang August 27, 2019 5:41 am

    Your comment is very salty and your reasoning why the story sucks is nonsense, people worked on this and this is their finishing product, it is only 6 chapters in so of course it is very silly and fresh. I would also like to say that just because it is Chinese does not mean it is bad and that Korean ones are the much better. I am sure that there are many comics out there that have a good story arc for the mid evil trope. I will not say this is a cringeworthy story or not because it is 6 chapters in and we barely now the villain and the characters very well so to say it failed is just nonsense. In other words i am saying you are judging a story that hasn't event cleared up on its own plot.

    mar rosie August 27, 2019 7:25 am
    Your comment is very salty and your reasoning why the story sucks is nonsense, people worked on this and this is their finishing product, it is only 6 chapters in so of course it is very silly and fresh. I wou... Bebang

    Koreans work harder with their artwork and they make sure their manhwa are in top quality. The Chinese Manhua almost like a rush work, always missing with something. It's like reading a lousy or very lazy manga artist work. Chinese are only good with writing novels, but not in making manhua.

    FreyjaLilith August 27, 2019 9:41 am

    Okay. A nonsense reasoning is what you want then.
    First, let's start with the prologue.
    You see parents willfully letting babies, 3 month old babies susceptible to easily drown, drift in flimsy baskets along the river because they want hmm, to basically monetize them. 'Oh nooo what about the siblings wedding expenses!!' Wow. So sorry I called it stupid. I'm busting out my thesaurus, let's see. Obtuse and imbecilic looks good.
    Second. The wishy-washy emperor.
    One moment he's throws the child to the nearest person. Second, he's all lemme cradle her, I could totally kill her laters but gimme. I've seen my fair share of tsundere/yandere dads with Claude, Caitel, Su-hee's dad, among others but it just doesn't compare. It's about proper pacing, execution, and dialogue. I dont see it here.
    Originality. Hmm. "Dude. There's TONS of webtoons similar to this one. Why are you particularly flaming on this." Give me something that makes a distinction to the main branch of the trope and I'll reconsider.
    Can someone honestly tell me they didn't cringe when they saw the maid scene, how like the back of the baby was blood-soaked and then not so subtle focus on the blood-soaked maid hands? Just thinking about it. Wow.
    Emperor: Known for his hatred for women
    Maid: VEry female. Drapes herself on the back of the emperor
    I cringe at my own memeness.
    But I digress
    You'd think the palace staff would be discerning to the first females they'd let enter the palace but noooo, let's have this obviously morally challenged, make-up disaster of a harlot whose boobs hanging out, the maid of the princess and future savior of the prince. Yeah sure.
    A+ expository and plot devices
    Wow. I rambled on.
    The art style is great though. No kidding. The characterization, shadows, backgrounds (ooh really dang son, you outdid yourself with this) It's outstanding. Elegant even
    But oof. Should be noted that author and artist are different people as is with most webtoons but yeah. Just pointing that out.
    So there. Should I elaborate?
    See, my comment wasn't intended to attack anybody, even if it presented itself like that.
    Just uhh, i dunno.
    Straight-up facts? *shrug*
    Yep. That's all

    Bebang August 27, 2019 4:46 pm

    I am just gonna end this right now because if i write another long ass reply we are both gonna keep going, and i’m pretty sure we both don't wanna waste our time thinking of responses to each other, so lets just agree to disagree

    SemiSenioritis6064 August 27, 2019 6:35 pm
    Okay. A nonsense reasoning is what you want then.First, let's start with the prologue.You see parents willfully letting babies, 3 month old babies susceptible to easily drown, drift in flimsy baskets along the ... FreyjaLilith

    Preach sis

    Shuki August 27, 2019 8:03 pm
    Koreans work harder with their artwork and they make sure their manhwa are in top quality. The Chinese Manhua almost like a rush work, always missing with something. It's like reading a lousy or very lazy manga... mar rosie

    I agree with you,I like reading Chinese novel and to me their novel is the best among Korean or Japanese novel,BUT when it about manga or webtoon I really can't understand it because it too fast forward.

    Shuki August 27, 2019 8:04 pm
    Koreans work harder with their artwork and they make sure their manhwa are in top quality. The Chinese Manhua almost like a rush work, always missing with something. It's like reading a lousy or very lazy manga... mar rosie

    I agree with you,I like reading Chinese novel and to me their novel is the best among Korean or Japanese novel,BUT when it about manga or webtoon I really can't understand it because it too fast forward.It like I missed some part of story.

    Ilikereading222 August 28, 2019 6:28 am
    Koreans work harder with their artwork and they make sure their manhwa are in top quality. The Chinese Manhua almost like a rush work, always missing with something. It's like reading a lousy or very lazy manga... mar rosie

    I have to agree too. Manhuas are always rushed, and a rushed story is the proof that the author is a beginner writer. It means that they did not lay a clear plan for the story beforehand, and that they have no understanding in pacing and timing. When stories are rushed, not only is it more difficult to understand, but we do not get attached to anything or anyone. And then they contradict themselves a LOT, like in this case, where a character does not stick to it’s assigned personality. It’s such a waste, they should focus on the story more.

    SemiSenioritis6064 August 28, 2019 10:06 am

    Hey hey you guys wanna check out this one manhua I found?? It's called 'the evil lady will change". It looks like a lot of people are writing it, and the story and art and pacing all seem really good! It's one of the few manhwa I'm super excited for, do check it out