This isn’t good...yet. It has potential but I feel like it’s skimming over too many th...

Kij0 August 29, 2019 2:58 am

This isn’t good...yet. It has potential but I feel like it’s skimming over too many things, like world and character building. Our mc hasn’t really been fleshed out yet, granted it’s only been 20+ episodes, so there’s still time to set this stuff up. The current world establishment isn’t clearly explained. I might have just forgotten, but all I really know is that there’s relics that are ranked by how powerful they are. But it leaves me with more questions when the mc can use lower ranked relics against higher ranked relics and there’s no limitations or regulations to its power when facing against a higher tier. It just doesn’t seem like there’s a lot of thought put into the power systems. I think this could be rectified given a few more chapters to really explore and establish rules and regulations, but if it doesn’t change then I’ll probably drop this story.

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    Kij0 August 29, 2019 3:02 am

    Also the only characters that have any sort of background or sort of established motive is the mc and the lackey #1 of the big baddy with the inferiority complex