cute but over explained...

tsk September 18, 2019 10:22 pm

cute but over explained...

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    Yaoi4life September 18, 2019 10:55 pm

    I don’t agreee it’s not over explained it’s just giving details

    tsk September 18, 2019 10:59 pm
    I don’t agreee it’s not over explained it’s just giving details Yaoi4life

    the whole character structure is about feeling superior or inferior, and the mc mentions those by himself while speaking to someone else, so yes it's over explained and with no much speech value

    Yaoi4life September 18, 2019 11:11 pm
    the whole character structure is about feeling superior or inferior, and the mc mentions those by himself while speaking to someone else, so yes it's over explained and with no much speech value tsk

    If the “speech” wasn’t there and it just started as, “I have an inferiority complex”, wouldn’t you ask why? That’s the reason there’s the “speech” so you understand the reason.

    tsk September 18, 2019 11:36 pm
    If the “speech” wasn’t there and it just started as, “I have an inferiority complex”, wouldn’t you ask why? That’s the reason there’s the “speech” so you understand the reason. Yaoi4life

    yeah but u can use a complex way of speech, facial signals, deeds to express the idea not just throwing it at the reader face

    Hota-chan September 19, 2019 1:48 pm
    yeah but u can use a complex way of speech, facial signals, deeds to express the idea not just throwing it at the reader face tsk

    when an author throws an idea explicitly to the reader is because that idea is not the main point. Here doesn't matter that he has an inferiority complex, what's more he even recognizes it. The point is to show that his own values about himself are poor, because society and loneliness can harm a person that much even when that person was on the other side. So I think the author made it really good, you just didn't understand it that way or simply doesn't like her style.

    tsk September 19, 2019 8:21 pm
    when an author throws an idea explicitly to the reader is because that idea is not the main point. Here doesn't matter that he has an inferiority complex, what's more he even recognizes it. The point is to show... Hota-chan

    u.can.still.give.the.same.message, without explaining!

    Yaoi4life September 19, 2019 8:24 pm
    u.can.still.give.the.same.message, without explaining! tsk

    Ok ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Hota-chan September 19, 2019 9:19 pm
    Ok ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ Yaoi4life

    It is always the same. They don't like the story but somehow they keep reading and commenting, lol (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜