I like this... But.

Noctreve September 20, 2019 3:36 pm

I don't like that he's being treated like that for 'science', it has a good plot and Kotora's story gave me an inspiration boost.
I like the concept of producing electricity from your body like a jellyfish.
But it's kind of cold being treated like that.
I hope that also four eyed bastard falls in love with Kotora.
He's too pure, he needs love and protection.

Responses
    tsk October 11, 2019 11:02 am

    u do know that human body does produces electricity without even the need to be *like jellyfish*? and that the boy near death story does make sense for *science*?
    just do your research, tho it's kinda inhuman to make experiments on humans but the mc agreed...

    Noctreve October 12, 2019 1:56 am
    u do know that human body does produces electricity without even the need to be *like jellyfish*? and that the boy near death story does make sense for *science*?just do your research, tho it's kinda inhuman to... tsk

    What I meant was that it's wrong to use him. I don't like that, and yes, I know that human body produces electricity but it's a small amount though, totally not like a *jellyfish*.

    tsk October 12, 2019 8:13 pm
    What I meant was that it's wrong to use him. I don't like that, and yes, I know that human body produces electricity but it's a small amount though, totally not like a *jellyfish*. Noctreve

    it's not the amount tho? it's how and in which body part that it occurs that makes this story sense-ful