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Chapter 1 had me excited. 2 and 3 are making me cringe a bit. I'm still holding out hope it gets better.
beta
Chapter 1 had me excited. 2 and 3 are making me cringe a bit. I'm still holding out hope it gets better.
that went from a 100 to 0 for me i liked her and wanted her to put them on their place and now that dude just come over and started showing off like... bitch