at least this story isnt an isekai... (incoming plot twist?). Usually these stories have i...

Soseki October 16, 2019 5:44 pm

at least this story isnt an isekai... (incoming plot twist?). Usually these stories have isekai undertones that get downplayed so much that it makes no sense why it was an isekai in the first place.

I already feel a sign of bad pacing considering she was ordered to help the palace out after being a loser... (there should be more build up considering she was utterly useless). now she's helping a gardener and then a conductor...

I hope they dont fall into a trend of her helping people over n over in a similar fashion because honestly, if they put two and two together she'd be found out sooner. I mean its not like she became smarter herself, just more capable, so it goes without saying that in this sense her ineptitude is maintained... tl;dr she's flaunting her powers and thinks she wont get caught??? and if she isn't, then this author CLEARLY made some inept aides for the prince.

Responses
    Shay October 16, 2019 8:09 pm

    I think there is a timelapse between for the moment she gets her power and she gets send to the palace. To me, when everyone tells her how capable she is, it shows days passing by

    Soseki October 16, 2019 10:40 pm

    yea i know it uses timelapses for some transitions... but its a bit of a crutch to me. I'd call it a minor weakpoint that they could improve on. My main issue will be if these "situations" just repeat. (like oh is she gonna help a chef bake a cake and then they'll be like, OWAOOOOOA THIS CAKE IS AMAZING MADE FROM AN ANGEL!!... but they cant find her etc etc....

    I will say I do like how her power isnt so obvious (so far) so she has to sorta figure it out, but I wish it was more mysterious to figure out ourselves as well.

    Shay October 16, 2019 11:47 pm

    To be honest I don't like it at all x)
    She's supposed to be a "hardworking" heroine, but her powers are the contrary... I don't really see the author could make it better since it just doesn't match

    Soseki October 17, 2019 3:18 am

    eh I can overlook it, i've seen other instances where characters are unreasonably overpowered. I actually think it would've made a better plot point to mention something about her family lineage that would give her her unusual abilities.

    Ilikereading222 October 17, 2019 4:28 pm

    I understand what you mean but in those time periods servants didn’t even know how to read. If wonderful music had played and two seconds later someone saw only a maid in the room, they still wouldn’t connect the dots.

    Soseki October 17, 2019 6:41 pm

    then honestly they should put some mention of that to convince the reader... as is, it just looks like it'll be poor detective work.