Then please just go, I personally didn't like dr Elise/ The story isn't even 10 chapters in yet, if we knew everything aleady then what would the point of he story be?
ever heard of writing a review ? Yeah well it's a new concept where people have the right to express their opinion about something even if it is negative. You don't get to tell people to go or stay. You didn't like Dr. Elise ? Good for you! That's called having a different taste.
I wrote this review after reading the content, it's not like I judged it by its cover. The comment section doesn't exist just to praise the author.
I fully agree with you but that point doesn't apply here. If we consider your comment as a review... well it sure is lacking (no explanation, examples and honestly it's just so basic,) it's the equivalent of watching 8 minutes of a movie and then feeling as though you are qualified to review the whole movie...
If you want to write a review then do it properly. Go in-depth, explain your points, give examples. Write a review about those first 8 chapters that will actually compel people to think about it more. Yet instead you wrote that.
Sure it may not be my place to tell you to go or to stay. But come on, what are you gonna do? Enjoy stories that you like or complain ("review") a story that has bearly began? I'm not saying that you can but if you're gonna do it like this then is there even a point?
I'm gonna be honest with you, the reason why I'm talking to you right now is not that I disagree with you. Actually it's mostly the opposite. The story is flawed but I still enjoy it enough to give it more time to develop. The reason that I have an issue with you is that you're not being productive, you're just being negative without being constructive.
Preach ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
Did you even read my original review? I clearly pointed out exactly what I disliked about the story:
- The source of her "powers"
- The male MC's character
- How she claims to want a peaceful life yet does the exact opposite the next minute
- How she lacks awareness about her situation when she performs said miracles yet somehow gets surprised when she's caught in trouble even though it was totally avoidable if she hadn't stuck her nose in matters that don't concern her.
I would've understood your reply if I had said "shit webtoon, don't read" but I didn't.
Yes, yes I did. Why else would I be talking to you right now?
Put that in full sentences with an explanation. Use paragraphs too if you want it to be a review.
What you said was on the same level as "shit webtoon, don't read" because while you made some "points" you did not deliver it properly. I mean come on, how is that "review" any good? It doesn't achieve it's intended purpose and honestly. Plus you didn't include half those points. What you just wrote it a bit better than the original but it's still lacking explanation.
That's why its a "capable" maid like Duuh this plot is full of contradictions that's what makes it interesting. And the FACT that she possesses a person or chuchu basta. Makes it more interesting. Like ugh so annoying
haha seriously? "Plus you didn't include half those points." ?
You don't know how to back down, do you? I haven't added any points in my second comment. They are exactly the same arguments but you didn't bother reading the original comment, did you. If you did you would've noticed that it's a repetition of what I previously said:
1- "I can't handle the fact that she got an upgrade from that weird jesus prisoner, that's too boring. " = The source of her "powers"
2- "Also, the fact that he wants to marry her or kill her is like asshole MC 101." = The male MC's character
3- "She claims she wants a quiet life yet keeps doing noticeable things" = How she claims to want a peaceful life yet does the exact opposite the next minute
4- "which is even worse for her since she is a princess in hiding whose head can fly even if she is very careful let alone her being as careless as she is." = How she lacks awareness about her situation when she performs said miracles yet
Instead of comprehending what others are saying, you opted to do what the internet does best: using the "if you don't like it then why are you here?" comeback whenever someone dislikes something you like.
Honestly, this is getting tedious so I won't be replying to your comments anymore
Just because it's interesting to you it doesn't mean it's interesting for everyone else. Some of us like the stuff they're reading to actually make sense. And that "ugh so annoying " at the end clearly shows your maturity.
1. Nope. Someone who hasn't read the story would have no idea what the hell you're on about. In a review, you are addressing people who haven't read the story yet.
2. That's 100% speculations.
3. Not well explained.
4. This one is halfway there but lacks explanation.
Well, then have a nice life with your unexplained, senseless comments.
God you’re so annoying, the OP clearly explained and gave valid points/reasoning as to why they disliked how the story is unraveling, and did so respectfully, they even went as far as to elaborate on their points at your request. Simply because you disagree with them, doesn’t mean that they are being ‘senseless’ or that what they’re saying is speculation. Every point they made is backed up by what happens in the story, so it’s rather fact. They’re common tropes that people like and dislike, clearly it’s not their cup of tea but I personally like the story. Even with that, you can still love a story and be able to criticize it too. Take a seat.
Well, that's rude. You do know that I agree with them? I even mentioned that in my responses. They did no explain it well, I am saying that it's not criticism. Also, a one-day-old account with no stories/comments... suspicious.
Like do you want me to use what they wrote and make it into what I consider criticism? Cuz I can do that. I have the whole of next week off.
Your review was great honestly, I don't know why you're getting attacked for it. I do like the story so far, but everything you said are genuine problems that could affect it if not addressed.
It's far less about what they said - I personally agree that the story had many flaws. It's more about the way they said it, expressed it and didn't explain it enough. What they said might be an opinion but it's not on the level of criticism. Imagine that you were the author, you wouldn't really be able to improve with that. Tbh, it could have been 29 likes to 9 dislikes if they placed some effort into this.
The plot and characters are very lacking. It's boring and even the looming threat of him finding out doesn't make me the least bit excited. I can't handle the fact that she got an upgrade from that weird jesus prisoner, that's too boring. Also, the fact that he wants to marry her or kill her is like asshole MC 101.
She claims she wants a quiet life yet keeps doing noticeable things which is even worse for her since she is a princess in hiding whose head can fly even if she is very careful let alone her being as careless as she is.
It's sad really that the author/artist of one of my favorite webtoons Dr Elise has produced this. I really wanted to like this...