Sorry but chapter 1 made me lose the rest of my brain cells. The kids bleeding, call the f...

Very Dramatic Fangirl October 25, 2019 5:23 am

Sorry but chapter 1 made me lose the rest of my brain cells. The kids bleeding, call the friggin ambulance. Ik she went back but come on what kind of train of thought is that?

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    lineardifferentiation October 27, 2019 9:38 pm

    it gets worse. Don't read it for the plot. or any sort of intelligence from any party involved. Hell, chapter 29 even lampshades the stupidity of the plot.

    So far, biggest problems are:
    1. MC doesn't recognize the person she wants to get revenge on after he practically shoves himself in her face
    2. bullies all over lack a serious amount of intelligence, if intimidation doesn't work, surely murder/kidnapping/extortion will work! AKA let's try to sexually coerce a child/a guy who can crack concrete with skulls
    3. Royals who don't do anything.
    4. If you are reasonably sure where an enemy is hiding/know their identity, you do not wait for 100% confidence. just. send your army after them, preferably before they finish powering up.
    5. MC thinks child labor is ok/there are no child services in this world. Or police. Or, as OP mentioned, ambulances. But hey, slither.io exists so we're all good. Not.
    6. everyone is somewhere on the spectrum of idiot. In fact, smartest person in this entire thing might be a 5 year old with a crush, since he's the only one who is reasonably intelligent for his age.

    Usako February 9, 2020 11:24 pm
    it gets worse. Don't read it for the plot. or any sort of intelligence from any party involved. Hell, chapter 29 even lampshades the stupidity of the plot.So far, biggest problems are:1. MC doesn't recognize th... lineardifferentiation

    LOL, as far as #1 goes, since he's been practically naked the first few times he's appeared in his adult form in front of her, it's no surprise she didn't look at his face!