The plot has so much potential but instead the outcome doesnt meet it. Can we talk about w...

AML October 25, 2019 11:09 am

The plot has so much potential but instead the outcome doesnt meet it. Can we talk about why didnt he go to the hospital yet? Besides if you have so much money, with technology like humanoids, i'm sure they can do full sampling at home to be sent to the labs. I mean you can do it at our tech level unless you need an MRI or smth. Everything else can be brought to your home. And then there's these cheesy situations that happen everytime thats overtaking the plot and its stuck with no progress. Its getting boring to see their lives repeat the same wake up, eat, sleep. I like cheesy when its done in a good way. This is kinda sad, i want to like this one but its difficult.

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    jana_83 October 25, 2019 1:23 pm

    I wanted to also, but found myself super bored with the "plot" by chapter 30 and decided to drop. It started out interesting, but is lacking something vital to a good story that I just can't put my finger on.

    The Dicktator October 25, 2019 8:50 pm

    I think he doesnt go cause of people will find out that he's sick. He kinda explained it now. People are after to get his money and company. So him being sick is a secret. If he were to be hospitalize = can't work = company in danger + people will find out.

    AML October 27, 2019 3:15 am
    I think he doesnt go cause of people will find out that he's sick. He kinda explained it now. People are after to get his money and company. So him being sick is a secret. If he were to be hospitalize = can't ... The Dicktator

    He doesnt need to be hospitalised at an actual hospital. If you have money you can do it at home. And hospitals dont just hand out patient's reports to anyone. Unless you're in a comma or smth. Even if you're his parent, if the patient is sane and an adult you need release papers to be able to share such information. Also, he has a doctor that visits him at home. It makes no difference than having a private dr at a hospital. Private clinics/hospitals exist. Discretion is there. That was annoying but really the unnecessary repetition of the daily lives without a spec of actual story is whats confusing me.

    jana_83 October 27, 2019 6:46 am
    I wanted to also, but found myself super bored with the "plot" by chapter 30 and decided to drop. It started out interesting, but is lacking something vital to a good story that I just can't put my finger on. jana_83

    I thought about it, and I think the problem is "rushing character development".
    There seems to be too much, too fast.