This one used to have another plot in the author's other work. It wasn't originally this a...

iluvhotshits October 27, 2019 10:01 pm

This one used to have another plot in the author's other work. It wasn't originally this alpha/omega shitstuff. In my opinion, it was so much better that way. What I hate about alpha/omega stories is that the mind gets divorced from the body, bodily autonomy is lost, and sexual pleasures rule over. For all I know, Hyesung may have called out to Dojin because of that damn bond.

Hyesung is being a damn prick all the time and he may have been taking advantage of Dojin's wealth etc. I agree that Hyesung also has issues and mistakes to resolve within himself but let's not forget who holds the actual power in this story, through and through, the one who is alpha and born to privileges. Hence, I don't think you can analyze the situation simply by from their actions.

Responses
    Off_Brand_Barbie October 27, 2019 10:31 pm

    Yes!!!! SAY IT LOUDER FOR THE PEOPLE IN THE BACK!!!

    LazBinx October 27, 2019 10:44 pm

    In the other story, Hyesung was a homophobic self denying gay who was willing to sleep with men for a place to stay. He was also drugged by one of his partners. It wasn’t better than this and he thought he had to be high to enjoy sex with Dojin until Dojin in that story faked it and said he didn’t drug him at all.

    There were several times in this story where Hyesung did not let himself be used—-he kicked an alpha at kyungsoo’s place and he beat one up at the brothel. So it shows he can protect himself and he’s not always going to victimized. I don’t know what his father did, but I assumed he made a pass and Hyesung left immediately.

    But where the author messes it up is she gives him these moments, mixed with moments of heat where he seems drugged and aggressive about sex, and then these aloof in between moments where he says no but then he’s also saying yes and enjoying it. The author needs to be clear and more consistent and stop using dubious consent as device for sex scenes. Stop making Hyesung seems ambiguous in what he wants during them and stop making Dojin driven by them as a way to connect to Hyesung.

    KNS October 27, 2019 11:37 pm
    In the other story, Hyesung was a homophobic self denying gay who was willing to sleep with men for a place to stay. He was also drugged by one of his partners. It wasn’t better than this and he thought he ha... LazBinx

    When they showed a flashback on what his dad did, it wasn't making a pass at him. His dad looked down on him and shunned him, because he wasn't a typical alpha

    KNS October 27, 2019 11:38 pm
    In the other story, Hyesung was a homophobic self denying gay who was willing to sleep with men for a place to stay. He was also drugged by one of his partners. It wasn’t better than this and he thought he ha... LazBinx

    When they showed a flashback on what his dad did, it wasn't making a pass at him. His dad looked down on him and shunned him, because he wasn't a typical alpha. No one knew he was an omega, and he didn't get his heat until he met Dojin

    KNS October 27, 2019 11:39 pm

    sorry for the repeated comment (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜 the 2nd comment is the correct one

    LazBinx October 28, 2019 12:45 am
    When they showed a flashback on what his dad did, it wasn't making a pass at him. His dad looked down on him and shunned him, because he wasn't a typical alpha KNS

    His father said he looked like his mom and even said he should sell himself before. He then started to question if he was an alpha at all. It seemed sexual and abusive in nature. But again the author probably should have hashed it out a little more because it can be interpreted a lot of ways.

    iluvhotshits October 28, 2019 3:47 am
    In the other story, Hyesung was a homophobic self denying gay who was willing to sleep with men for a place to stay. He was also drugged by one of his partners. It wasn’t better than this and he thought he ha... LazBinx

    Sorry, I couldn't remember the other plotline much, in terms of the situation. I'm just not fond of the alpha/omega set-up that's why I prefer that one better. It seems that we both agree though that the author is responsible for the horrible scene progression.

    Anidict13 October 28, 2019 5:28 am

    Honestly, I don't really like Hyesung anymore and I would totally support him and Dojin breaking up/separating but then there's the issue of them being bonded pairs which is the main reason they're chained to each other. But even if I don't like Hyesung, I don't want to see him unhappy/cry everytime he has sex with Dojin. I'd rather see them separate and find the right partners than see them forcing their unstable relationship like this until it finally works out, if it ever will. Like, they can't be like this *forever* and they already have a kid.

    I'm hoping the next chapter reveals that Hyesung was just embarrassed or something and not... Feeling violated.

    Anidict13 October 28, 2019 5:30 am
    Sorry, I couldn't remember the other plotline much, in terms of the situation. I'm just not fond of the alpha/omega set-up that's why I prefer that one better. It seems that we both agree though that the author... iluvhotshits

    The other story's main characters were different and had better plot, tbh. It was only Dojin and Hyesung's side story that was really tragic.