Artstyle

Honestly, I didn’t think this art was bad though I just read through it my first time, so I flew through it. But if you really think this is rough I wonder what your opinion would be on “The Old Man who got a Second Round in Another World”. In my own opinion it’s ok but kinda cringe worthy because practically every female has the exact same face. Different clothes, different hair, somewhat different personalities, but literally every female in it has the exact same face with hardly any expression changes. I’m grateful for it, still reading the story but like damn...

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i looked over it. it was more bearable than this story but yeah the story is pretty cringe.

I looked over a few chapters from this one just focusing on the art, I’m not sure if I got exactly what you meant but there was a few times in the beginning where especially the mc’s body looked disproportionate and sometimes looking at side profiles some of their faces looked oddly elongated. I did notice in later chapters though that the side profile thing got better though.
But I can see that the art style is a bit rough and could be better but I don’t think it’s awful, I’m usually more picky about manga whose art style makes it hard to tell the difference between characters. For example if you read multiple works of a certain artist and some of the mcs look almost exactly like each other, it’s even to me when there’s a story switch mid manga and you have to discern through just the reading to find out that these aren’t the same characters and once you’ve gotten used to that then it switches back to the original people, by then I tend to forget who the original people were. It may be just me but still. The manga I mentioned I didn’t really have that issue cause at least they went all out changing everything else besides the face but it was one of the few that was making me cringe enough to make reading it a bit hard for me.

Tbh, the artwork is fine. It would've have been interesting if Abel and Lilith just kept a master and student relationship or like mother and son but the chapter where he makes "love" with Lilith just disgust me so.... Im sorry if everyone disagree but I just don't like it and think it's utterly ridiculous

I completely agree, it was weird af. But it’s the trope regardless if it’s simply a fantasy or isekai manga withe the same general type of world, just has to have a harem. Cause apparently the approval of a lot of women makes the mc really cool, even better if he gets to make “love” with them.