I agree with you the storyline is not straightforward as I wish it to be even the main characters I feel like they are lacking something.
They're trying to make something similar to killing stalking, but killing stalking is horror, not romance and it's like they're pushing for romance instead and it's not working
No killing stalking, more like that vampire one, I forgot the name
ohh really killing stalking
that's interesting i have read couple of chapters of it. however, it was not my cup of tea so i stopped reading it.
but i can see what you are saying.
This is literally 27+ chapters and we still haven't seen any character development. Like what is the use of bringing all of these other guys into the story when they don't play any major role in it?? If they all somewhat turn into a potential lover then that'll make sense but there's no chemistry at all with any of the characters