Responses
YESS!!!! i hope the confusion factor doesn't make people dislike this it had SO MUCH potential to be one of the greatest yaoi's of all time. just... idk... had to make cuts? maybe it wasn't popular enough and they had to cut down the chapters? (if so, what a damn shame.)
I've also enjoyed re-reading because of all the connections that are made later on. a HUGE SHAME not all the connections made the final cut. we need an deleted scenes chapter!!!!!!
Agree with most of you that it was choppy. Story telling can do much better. I don’t know, maybe because I read to chapter 4 before going back and found key details that I had missed that felt like Easter eggs and I was hooked. Or maybe because here we have two people so obviously in love and didn’t sleep together because they were animals in heat. Maybe because Ayame is the a hopeless romantic and never wavers. Get yourself someone like him!