Responses

It’s one thing to leave the obvious unsaid but it’s another to not give vital exposition to make the story make sense. Take an instance where a character is eating food. We, as an audience, don’t need to know where that person got the food from. But take the situation in this story, where a ‘plot twist’ happens where a trial challenge had changed. As a story, it should have set up what the 3 original challenges were prior to making a reveal that doesn’t hold weight, because it seems like it was just an ass pull with no set up.
This is kinda hard to follow. I think there’s just chunks of information that should be included in this... I didn’t even know that she didn’t want to be the queen or that the 3 trial was even changed until right when it happened. Her goals are so unclear. I’m assuming she’s just here to keep her sister from suffering the same fate and possibly getting revenge(?).