why??

hiro8801 November 29, 2019 5:50 am

there are so many hate comments but it wasnt that bad of a story yeah there were parts that weren't that great and the love making was not juicy at all but that doesn't mean it completely sucked
and if you don't like it why not just drop it and read something else it aint that hard to do
don't leave hate just bc you don't like something at least give valid reasons why you don't that make actual sense
take in consideration someone took a lot of time drawing and thinking of a plot for this as well as the translator giving their time to share it with everyone don't just talk sht bc you can

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    FujoshiWeebKoreaboo December 6, 2019 8:34 am

    Haha for real, there should be at least acknowledgement of those who put the effort in this. I also agree that some of the comments below are just utterly crude and malicious. Just because the comic became frustratingly messy halfway or smth like that, it doesn't mean you can claim that the entire comic is "shit". You can definitely say you didn't like it because it's really your choice and opinion. It's when you outright say it's shit without any actual information backing up your opinion is what makes it so crude.

    Constructive critisicm is what should be done and which you could say it like this for example, and this is what i personally think about as well.

    I truly felt that near the end the story became repetitive and the plot became lost. I wished Siwon and Jinha actually resolved their miscommunications and other issues through different real life experiences instead of having Lu Xuan Run be the main "obstacle". This would've been a bit more interesting as they could've cleared up the issues and insecurities that both parties have more realistically. Because Lu Xuan Run was portrayed as the "main villian", he felt empty as a character and I couldn't really connect his backstory with his actions. With how Siwon is as a character, I do wish that he was just tougher in general instead of being a "pitiful flower" that would whine or something. I felt that sometimes when Siwon was angry, I could only imagine a small angry kitten lol. I do know in general there's an uke and seme or shou and gong and so on, and that the uke is typically shown as the "weaker" or "smaller" person in the relationship. I just would've liked him to have a more grit to his strength and not be the "dumber" one of the two and which Jinha would then save him for every little thing. That could've been developed more for him near the end of the story. Vice versa for Jinha. I did like the early scenes of Siwon facing prejudice because of being in a relationship with a man though and how it tied to the ending. Though it would've been better if it was developed a bit more. I also liked how Siwon's timid and unconfident personality shone through because of his father's beratings as a child and not just because he's the "uke". Just some things the author could work on, as well as possibly working more on the plot as it progresses since the story began with a very strong start. The art improvement along the way was great and for me overall the story was definitely refreshing.