First impression

Okarisu December 3, 2019 4:05 pm

It’s cute and the art is good, but I get the feeling that this is by someone inexperienced. All four main characters happen to be gay, the main character is dense to the point that he hears a confession in one chapter and later in that same chapter is confused when the guy looks at him when saying he has a crush, it’s pretty fast pace, the friend has a crush on him so there’s a cliched love triangle. It seems like it was written by a teenager or something. Doesn’t mean it’s gonna be bad, though. I’ll stick around.

Responses
    Okarisu December 3, 2019 3:00 am

    I made it to chapter six before it got too cringe-worthy.

    rosie December 3, 2019 3:23 am

    They've written another webtoon before this one, Voice of Love. That one is better. For their first 2 webtoons, I think the author did an excellent job! I couldn't even imagine how much work and effort went into planning the storyline as well as the drawings.

    Gregque December 3, 2019 3:41 am

    Super agree. It gave me a bad case of second hand embarrassment.

    Okarisu December 10, 2019 11:31 pm
    They've written another webtoon before this one, Voice of Love. That one is better. For their first 2 webtoons, I think the author did an excellent job! I couldn't even imagine how much work and effort went int... rosie

    Wow, they wrote Voice of Love? Weird. It’s been a while, but I think I remember enjoying that one.

    rosie December 11, 2019 2:17 am
    Wow, they wrote Voice of Love? Weird. It’s been a while, but I think I remember enjoying that one. Okarisu

    Yeah, that one was a little less cringey. Glad you liked it!