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I didnt think that was lili's plan though. I thought he was in a hurry to get marlene back because he doesnt want any one else touching him during his heat. Not really to take advantage of the heat. But maybe i read that wrong.
After reading your comment, I forgot all my anxieties with how the plot twists and simply drowned with those artistic combination of phrases and words you chose for your composition. It made my day.
I dont like it. I mean.. not the part with him walking into enemy territory to prove his love, thats cool and all. it just feels like Marlene's plan relies on taken advantage of Lili's weakened state due to the full moon, hopeful it will make him more receptive to forgiving him. it would be more impactful if this was a speech being delivered to a person who's sober and rational, his decision not being influenced in any way by other factors outside just his own thoughts/feelings. that would make this touching reunion between them more emotionally fulfilling. my fujoshi instincts are telling me the conflict will conclude with passionate break up sex after a mostly one sided speech followed by some sweet nothings, slowly breaking down coyotes defenses until he collapses emotionally under the pressure of his horneyness and inevitably fucks him (all according to ML's keikaku) but it feels slightly sexually coercive when I say it out loud.