Responses
When he was going to "neuter" him? *shivers
I KNOW RIGHT?? that shit is fucking traumatizing. holy shit. there's no way may would fall in love with him after that EXCEPT if may was just THAT fucked up emotionally. which just further proves why this story didn't work—the seme needs life and prison and may needs psychiatric therapy. them ending up together is just unrealistic (even for yaoi standards), romanticizing, and frankly, disgusting.
I get what the author was trying to do, but it didnt work. The seme is clearly still unstable and sure things are going good now but what if he finds out he killed the cat? Or if he cheats on him one day. Will he snap and kill him? The fact that I needed to ask that question is why i didnt like this. If it had been a story about the bar owner it would of made it into one of my favorites ever I'm sure.