The big conflict is saying, "I'm psychic." He would have been better off just saying, "I dream about you." Gradually ease in the psychic part. "You like me?!" "Yes, yes, but what's important here is... you're in danger."
You should be an editor... good call
The big conflict is saying, "I'm psychic." He would have been better off just saying, "I dream about you." Gradually ease in the psychic part.
"You like me?!"
"Yes, yes, but what's important here is... you're in danger."