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Thumbs down. Guessing that means it doesn’t get any better. Downvote me all you want. It won’t make the story any better, lol.
beta
Thumbs down. Guessing that means it doesn’t get any better. Downvote me all you want. It won’t make the story any better, lol.
Does the writing get any better? It seems rushed and... well, bad.