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And I am hoping that Daya's comment wasn't written by an adult, because it sounds like a whiny pre-teen.
Lol, much closer to menopause than puberty. Doesn’t change the fact the artist had no follow through, and the story became tedious
The translation wasn’t very good, and it was grating to read. “A walking aid” ya mean a crutch? The first half of the story had a decent premise that fell apart for the second half, making it a chore to get thru. I really hope it wasn’t an adult who wrote this.