It literally has 4 freekin chapters though
I've read lots of oneshots that were able to perfectly build on the attraction and relationship though. That's why this kind of story should not be cramped into four chapters.. It'll only make it more obvious that it's missing a lot of elements.
too soon to judge. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Right!! It was so confusing and i just couldnt hook myself to the story
I know everyone is here going kyaaa.. So cute and whatnot but the story would have turned out better if there weren't so much plot holes, and confusion
. I feel like I just rushed through it while skipping major parts like exactly how did they develop? How did the attraction build up? And so on